The new Goddess - Comments, page 3

I forbid you to let her die. She didn't even properly kiss Finn yet! Gods! She better live or else!

WHAT?!?
She's not allowed to die, she's just not! Wow, now I know how bad plottwists feel from the other end!
Update soon PLEEEEAAAAASSSSSSEEEEE!!!!

@The_Bright_One

Thank you! :D

Great new chapter! :D

aww thank you! and i'm glad you follow the story :)

@Half-Blood of the Sea

Awww, how cute. I'm glad that they finally get todether. Great story if I haven't said it before. (If I haven't, shame on me.)

I'm loving this so far

@PrincessoftheSea

aww thank you! :)

GIMME MORE!!!! PLEEEEEAAAASSSSSEEEE!!!!! it's so good.

@The_Bright_One
Yeah me to!

Thanks! I really enjoy your writing and I just want to see it be the best that it can be! :)

@The_Bright_One
Thank you! I love you're support! You're really helping me!

Haha well I like it! :)

@The_Bright_One
Thanks! I made something but I'm not 100% happy about it haha. So I keep drawing :) (the one i've got now will be the cover until I have I better one haha)

Cool! I can't wait to see the finished product! :D
And it's my pleasure!

@The_Bright_One

Yeah, I'm thinking about it. I'd like to make my own, so it's work in progress
Thanks a lot for giving all these tips and support :)

Great new chapter! The paragraphs make it way easier to read! Good job! :)
Have you thought about adding some cover art to attract more readers?

:)

@The_Bright_One

Thanks again for the tips! :)

Wow! Really good new chapters! :)
Next try and make a new paragraph each time there's a new person talking or a new idea in a sentence! It splits up the chapter nice and evenly for the reader! :)
Keep up the great work!