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@ijay
That's perfect! Thank you so much! Again with the godly parent, do you mind too much if I change it for this story to fit into the plot I have planned?
(And omg I have a friend named Jasmine (her last name is spelt in Chinese but it's also pronounced Lore) which is a bit weird. At the moment her hair is streaked green ;))
Name: Jasmine Lore
Age: 16
Personality: Bittersweet. She's sarcastic and dry, and brutally honest. She doesn't seem to give a curse about who she hurts when she speaks the truth, which simply makes people even more surprised when they see her launch into lectures about not hating anybody and loving everyone as much as you possibly can. She hates hate. She hates anyone who hurts unreasonably. She hates and craves revenge. She sometimes hates the gods. She hates herself some of the time, for hating everything when she hates hate.
When she starts telling jokes, they're never mean. And she's really good at getting people to laugh. It's just that, most of the time, she's not in the MOOD to get people to laugh. So when she does make jokes, it's beautiful and rare and her laugh lights up her face.
The more she tells you the hurtful truth, the more she loves you. She's the most honest person you'll ever meet, because she feels like dishonesty is one of the cruelest things you can do to a person.
And when she makes someone cry because of her honesty, she gets very cold and acts like a wise woman, almost. As though their crying is beneath them. Which makes them want to stand back up again.
But if she makes someone cry because of something she did, she crumples herself. Someone else crying can usually get her to cry- and get really, really angry.
She loves nature? But why? She doesn't really know. Maybe there's something simple about plants and their lives. A beautiful simplicity without all the wickedness humans carry with them.
And she can eat anything without gaining a pound. It's insane. Her metabolism is that good.
Appearance:
Her hair is long and jet-black: always streaked with different dyes.
She has olive skin that gives off this earthy kind of glow. Her face is set, with strong cheeks and a fierce jaw. Her eyebrows are almost always knitted together. Her nose is defined and almost pointy. The softest part of her face is her eyes- they always look so mellow and calm compared to her face. Her ears are very stick-outy and cute in an elfish way. Her eyes are hazel. She's pretty tall, for a girl. Her body is almost stretched, in a way- her limbs are very gangly and lean.
She's an unclaimed daughter of Persephone. Persephone doesn't wish Hades to know she birthed a daughter; she's allowed to have affairs, of course, but it is definitely advised against her NOT to do so.
backstory: lives in Camp Half-Blood one month out of the three months of summer. She's required to go, but her father only wants her to to the absolute minimum required. He knows she needs to be able to defend herself but he wants nothing to do with the gods or monsters, believing if they moved around America enough times, they would lose monsters on their trail. Jasmine has never been in the same spot for more than four and a half months. She craves settlement. She kept telling her dad that it doesn't matter it they keep moving around; monsters are everywhere. He didn't listen until they stumbled into a monster chain in Seattle- she had to run away (something she'd been prepared for just in case of emergencies like this) to get them off her dad. And once she killed it, she realized that this is what she had to do. She could leave her dad alone. And so she did.
Chris Anderson
14
American, unclaimed
has freckles splashed across his nose, deep blue eyes, slim figure. Strawberry blond hair comes to the back of his neck. Not much muscle, but a lot of stamina.
Chris lived with his Aunt Agatha until she died, he was taken by child care workers and placed in an orphanage. Chris enjoys reading, although he can't stay concentrated for too long. Chris lived in the orphanage till he was 12 and made a friend named Isabel. He ran from the orphanage when he turned 12.
@Filia Sapientia
I love it! But is it okay if I tweak the godly parent a little for this story? I have a plan in mind for the unclaimed demigods...
Name: Alyssa Kate
Alias/Nickname: Lyssa
age and gender: 13 years old, female
Appearance: Has wavy blonde hair that's always in a side braid and multi-color eyes that change depending on her mood. Wears combat boots, jean shorts, and a t-shirt on summer days, and jeans and a CHB sweatshirts in the winters. Has a long scar running down her stomach from when she was little and got attacked by an empousia.
Godly Parent: Unclaimed American demigod, but she's a daughter of Hecate, becomes a Hunter of Artemis.
Personality: Alyssa is a sweet, loyal chick, who Is always there when a friend is needed. But, if you make fun of her, you'll find out just how well she can use a sword. Has a huge fear of spiders, which leads people to think she's a daughter of Athena. She hates cussing, as it reminds her of her abusive dad, who always cussed at her. She's one of those people who won't say when she's hurting. Hides her pain.
Backstory: Alyssa ran away from her abusive dad when she was ten years old. She found a satyr and he took her to camp. After being at camp for two years and not being claimed, Alyssa started feeling some anger towards her mother for not claiming her. When the Hunters happened to visit camp one day a little after her thirteenth birthday, Alyssa seized the chance to get away from the place where she didn't belong. Now a Hunter, Alyssa is the girl who's below the lieutenant.
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dude of course! it's your story
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