Wait, What? - Comments, page 2

@nico_di_angelo_addict
Sure I don't mind, just I kinda want her name to be Alexia now...
I'm so obsessed with names it's not funny... xD

@YouKnowWHOIAm
Haha jess Yeah I know who you are.

@Fenrir_Glacies
Yes I know what an outline is. Thanks for the description, I'll definitely give it a shot.

@nico_di_angelo_addict
Plot outlining is when you have the details of the story all in outline form (You do know what an outline is, right?) It's not as detailed as the actual story but it's where you organize the flow of events and write why so-and-so happens. :)

DEMON CAKE!!
You should know who I am by now.
LOL!

@UltimateBookWorm
Your close...
I like your OC, but is it okay if I pair you with another?

@Fenrir_Glacies
Yeah I'm not that great, but random question what is plot outlining...

Full Name: Colette Michagelo
Godly Parent: Fortuna (Greek form: Tyche)
Hair color: Blonde
Eye color: Dull Aqua
Camp Half Blood or Camp Jupiter? Camp Jupiter 'cause yolo
Brief Description, you cannot be Nico's gf, already taken :P (awww xD)
Mainly a lucky person, has survived near death experiences multiple times, is not allowed to enter the lottery (Her Mother wont allow her because she will most likely win). Is a very skilled fighter, has known Jason since she was very young, sneaks out of camp Jupiter a lot to go to the nearest town and go to the stores. Likes to go on adventures and is quite rebellious, also enjoys being a crazy daredevil and is a huge bookworm (Considers herself a dauntless shadow-hunter-victor of the hunger games from district 12).Is currently single as a pringle, looking for a funny and sweet prince charming/book character to sweep her off her feet, is secretly a hopeless romantic. Loves the idea that people the world as she knows it is part of a book yet is kind of upset that she was never mentioned by Jason to well... Anyone



I also believe you are around 14-16.

Okay so in terms of grammar and spelling, I'd say your story is great. But plot-wise, it's kind of dragging and the sentences don't really flow well at times.

With that said, try plot-outlining. It may seem tedious at first but it's a useful writing tool.

@UltimateBookWorm
Hahahahh

@Calypso
I will!

u should read my story and tell me what u think in the comments

No problem. I luv reading

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LOL oh gods sorry @i luv pj for spamming your notifications. My comp lagged...

@i luv pj
I do that a lot. But I use fake names, so nobody knows who I am. :D :D :D

@i luv pj
I do that a lot. But I use fake names, so nobody knows who I am. :D :D :D

@i luv pj
I do that a lot. But I use fake names, so nobody knows who I am. :D :D :D

@i luv pj
I do that a lot. But I use fake names, so nobody knows who I am. :D :D :D

@i luv pj
I do that a lot. But I use fake names, so nobody knows who I am. :D :D :D

@i luv pj
I do that a lot. But I use fake names, so nobody knows who I am. :D :D :D

@i luv pj
I do that a lot. But I use fake names, so nobody knows who I am. :D :D :D