The Fall - Comments

I love it. I think you should write more too

I really like this story I think you should write more!

@the_last_stop
No problem! Glad to be of service! :D

Thanks, I'll fix that up. Didn't even realize I did that.


@Filia Sapientia

It's good so far, but you're shifting POVs. It was all first person POV, then at the end of Chapter two, you went into third person. Make sure to stay in one POV so you don't confuse your readers. :)

Awesome so far!