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The Fall

Summary

The crew of the Argo II begin their long journey home after stopping Gaea. As is usual for demigods, some thing happens and Percy and Annabeth have to deal with the trauma of their long, and deadly journey.



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Comments

I love it. I think you should write more too

SadieKane SadieKane
12/5/14

I really like this story I think you should write more!

galeckey123 galeckey123
9/20/14

@the_last_stop
No problem! Glad to be of service! :D

Filia Sapientia Filia Sapientia
9/8/14

Thanks, I'll fix that up. Didn't even realize I did that.


@Filia Sapientia

the_last_stop the_last_stop
9/8/14

It's good so far, but you're shifting POVs. It was all first person POV, then at the end of Chapter two, you went into third person. Make sure to stay in one POV so you don't confuse your readers. :)

Filia Sapientia Filia Sapientia
9/8/14
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