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Name: Alexandra Orlova
Story Description: Alexandra is an Exorcist (demigod who works in the Underworld). She wakes up after a horrible fight which she doesn't remember and finds herself in Camp Half-Blood.
Link: http://www.percyjacksonfanfiction.com/Story/84022/Alexandra-Orlova/
How many stars would you give it?: A solid 8.5
Did you read the rules?: I wouldn't be writing this form if I hadn't
Have or will you read any other reviews?: Sure, why not?
Password: Vanilla (I hope it is not wrong)

OK... Just so you know, I tend to avoid doing spelling errors, but there might be one that I missed, so sorry in advance.
Hope I impress you or something and that you're still active on this site

Name: Alexandra Orlova
Story Description: Alexandra is an Exorcist (demigod who works in the Underworld). She wakes up after a horrible fight which she doesn't remember and finds herself in Camp Half-Blood.
Link: http://www.percyjacksonfanfiction.com/Story/84022/Alexandra-Orlova/
How many stars would you give it?: A solid 8.5
Did you read the rules?: I wouldn't be writing this form if I hadn't
Have or will you read any other reviews?: Sure, why not?
Password: Vanilla (I hope it is not wrong)

OK... Just so you know, I tend to avoid doing spelling errors, but there might be one that I missed, so sorry in advance.
Hope I impress you or something and that you're still active on this site

alrighty here we go
Name- The Two That Went Missing
Story Description- Nico get's stuck with 2 idiots and has to stop Pandora's jar from breaking. Can they do it?
Link-http://www.percyjacksonfanfiction.com/Story/34723/The-Two-That-Went-Missing/
How many stars would YOU give it?- oh jeez.. probably 3 1/2
Did you read the rules?- Yep
Have or will you read any of the other reviews?- I'm gunna do it right now
Insert Password here(It's in the rules and I'll change it from time to time so you can't just read the previous forms and put that one)- Vanilla?

when you do that, I'll do the form thing for the squeal to our story (that's the review i really want, but it won't make sense with out reading the first one)
i'm sorry, there are some pretty bad spelling mistakes, I go went back to reread the story and cringed a couple of times.

pshhhh hey bookworm

@Sons Of Anarchy
The form is in chapter 1, just copy it, paste it into a comment and fill you the questions asked! ^_^

what kind of form

@Sons Of Anarchy
Sure but if you want a proper review I need a form filled out from you!

I am just writing a new story called " THE ETERNAL WARRIOR ". Though I am also stuck with my previous story which I also like to finish along with it, thanks to my crazy homework and school.
My new story is a little different than the common stuff goes around.It may be little descriptive,being first timer but could you just check and tell me if it works or not.

That's okay, thanks for the review. I'll keep the tips in mind when I write more

@Child_of_Minerva
I'm so sorry! I've written you review like 6 million times and every single time I try to publish it I keep getting an error message!

Ugh! I am dying to know how you'll review my story! Please update soon...


Sorry, I'm really impatient, and I've been checking this every time I come on the website.

@Stop it Rick
ok, I think you know me from this account?!
I'll point out the mistakes and stuff but it will kill me inside.

@PMVQueen
Ah! Well, I love good feedback, but I need criticism or it seems kinda silly I guess? I mean even if it's nitpicky and stuff, so I really want to grow.

@Stop it Rick
On my other account I've said how much I adore your story in the comments! Arg why do all the people that write my fav fanfictions want reviews?!

Name- Nova
Story Description- Kids of the Seven meet a new enemy, will they survive?
Link- http://www.percyjacksonfanfiction.com/Story/57344/New-Generation/
Give a small description of your story (with your own words not a copy of your story description)- We all know the story of the Seven, and how they beat Gaea. Now, another treats is waking up, and it's up to the New Generation(see what I did there) to save the world
How many stars would YOU give it?- Probably 3.5 - 4
Did you read the rules?- yes duh
Have or will you read any of the other reviews?- yes
Insert Password here(It's in the rules and I'll change it from time to time so you can't just read the previous forms and put that one)- COCONUT ;*

@Filius_Victoria
Nah it's fine, It's just because I'm really serious on rules. I know my writing ain't perfect but I can sure review! ;)

@PMVQueen
Okay. I see. But why make it about the rules? Just review the story. Sorry for being so aggressive.

Guys don't start a fight in the comments please

@Filius_Victoria
I said if they break one of the rules I'll give a bad review like I'll only look at the bad and not at the good.

Name- Laur(Just Laur, that's all.)
Story Description- Sophie loathed being ignored. She had good ideas too. But she was too young, too sheltered by her big brother, Malcolm.
Link- http://www.percyjacksonfanfiction.com/Story/61099/Child-of-Athena/
Small description- Sophie, a young daughter of Athena, is sheltered. Her full brother, Malcolm, is way too overprotective, and the same went for her entire cabin. But what if Sophie doesn't like that? What if Sophie gets chosen for a quest?
My star rating of it- About eight, I'd say, but hey, I'm biased.
What idiot wouldn't read the rules, seriously. Yes, I read them.
Password is coconut

@Araneae Siqua
The point of a reviewer that gives "negative" reviews is not to be inherently negative. They are supposed to point out things that could be fixed. That's not being negative. That's just being a perfectionist. There's a difference between trashing someone and telling them that they aren't perfect (but how to get closer to perfect), a difference between destructive criticism and constructive criticism. But, seeing as this person's other account has two stories that are very, VERY far from perfect, I doubt that this person has the ability to know what to say in order to make stories better. That's what I find funny about those who post reviews on this site. Everyone goes running to them, just wanting to get a compliment on their story. No one realizes that the person they begged for a review from doesn't know how to write a review. But whatever floats your boat, Spider-Girl.