Of Vines and Men - Comments, page 2

Dummmmmbbbb

I love it!

Can't wait!

Your review is up, love ;)

@Great Gatsby
Stop with the spam buddy

@Constrictor
@Face Of Death

Yay I love this story

Bad- Chapter Length and Character description/building
Good- Plot, Story line. MC, really funny and unique!

I loved it but I felt that the characters were not introduced enough.

@Rick_Riordan
Good and bad? Start with the bad first lol.

Wow. All that comes to mind.

Great Writing !!! :)
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Wow! This is really good!! I love the way you capture the world of Percy Jackson, and set your fanfiction in the time of the books, good idea! I also love the way you portray your characters! It's really good, and I felt drawn to all your awesomely realistic characters! Also, representation!! Love it!! I really hope you continue this, because it's really good!

love the new chapter!

Love this!

@Stop it Rick
Lol that profile pic is on point!

@Chelsea_Delos
thanks! means a lot

I love this!

@Morningstar.
I'm legit laughing??? Like are you going on every story and writing some unoriginal hate on them? If you're going to hate at least read the fic and reference it sweetie.

Horrible

@Abused Angel
Thank you! I have a whole plot for this, and it will probably end up going on for a while. Fanfiction is kind of my sandbox to make my writing better, I'm so glad you like it!