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i thought it would be fun. I cant pick which book to do, i like them all.
Name: Alaric Blake
Age: 17/18
Hair color: dark brown
Eye color: gold
Godly parent: Bellona
even though Alaric is an awesome centurion, but he hates leading people, he would want to do it himself (even fight an army). but when he has to, he is like a born leader. he was born in Ireland, but his father took him to New Rome.
power: he can enhance his body (strength, speed, senses, etc.).
fun facts: his first friend was his pet male black dire wolf named Faelen. his weapons are a long bow made of Quebracho and Black Ironwood and war gantlets (made for hand to hand combat). he also teaches it to the new recruits (he really likes doing that).
hobby: play an rim-blown flute.
this is from the story I am writing now: Alvador wakes as if he's had a nightmare, and- and he doesn't remember anything. His head throbs as he attempts to bring back the memories but it doesn't do any good. It's the dead of winter and cold, freezing and snow is everywhere. "Alvador." That's his name and that's all he remembers. Who is he? What happened? Why doesn't he remember?
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Braxlyn, fiery in her attitude and her hair. She searches for Alvador after he disspeared from Camp. Lucy helps as well bu it isn't much use. They all think Alvador is dead. He has to be. There was no way in surviving.
Alvador is dead.
The Ginger and White Head still searches.
Where could he be?
I thought it'd be an interesting way to meet new people. I loved House of Hades. "My cold, green eyes drifted across the barren landscape as I tightened my fists. There was nothing left. Tears clouded my once dry eyes as I sank to my knees, choked sobs racking my fragile body. I was too late... Too late..."
Name: Seth Park
Age: 15 yrs
Hair color: golden brown, flecks of blonde
Eye color: baby blue
Godly parent: Demeter, goddess of the harvest
Seth is a down to earth person, he likes having control and can be selfish at times- but is sweet as well. He grew up with his dad in New Jersey, before he was attacked by a Cyclopes and his dad drove him to camp.
Power: He's able to control or move plants to his will, along with growing them at a much faster rate
Fun facts: Seth has a grudge against pancakes after almost choking from one when he was four.
@sweetT31
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@Go_chase_a_Donut
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~novelistnoel
-You seem very motivated
-The sea of monsters
-Just cannon really
- In one second we were kissing. My back was digging into the side of my cabin but I could barely feel it, my hands tugging through his hair. His tongue found it's way into my mouth, his lips slanted over mine and I lost the ability to breathe and think, but the was only one thought running through my head, Mine.
(((Sorry that it's romance but that is my favourite thing to write)))
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Game of Thrones???
12/29/15