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Electric Kiss

Chapter 2

The forges weren't the safest place especially when Leo was around. Quickly walking in, I ducked to have a wave of fire blast above my hair. The one thing that was good about Leo was that he could make the best roasted smores in camp. Aside from that, he was just crazy Leo.

"Leo!" Piper cried. Racing up from the lower decks, Leo had an expression of guilt. He had fotten a lot taller in the past year, and he was also not half bad looking now. Leo was now, five feet seven and had rippling muscles due to his working in the forges. I stillp had no idea what was he wroking for, but what I needed was a cap of invisibility.

"Sorry about that, Beauty Queen, What do you need, a new dagger?" He wondered. I smiled, it was interesting to be in here, but also looked scary. "I need a invinsible cap, that I could use." Piper said.
"Oh, like Annabeth's could come in handy when it comes to quests. Alright, I'll get on it. Umm what baseball logo?"
"Baseball?" I wondered. "Just give me The Angels." She smiled. With a quick turn I stormed off toward the Poseidon cabin. I needed to talk with someone, who know this place all to well.

The Poseidon cabin was interesting. From the way the bed was arranged it used to be a twin size. Almost everthing in this room had a symbol of Poseidon. Walking in I noticed, Percy was holding his sword. "Oh, Piper, it's you. What seems to be the problem?"

"I have a favor to ask you, since you're a guy." Piper started. Percy glanced at her, as he reformed his sword back to a pen. "Umm, I think you should talk with Annabeth. I mean, I'm a guy so it'd been a bit inappropiate."

I gazed at him and smile. "It's because you're a guy you'd understand. Annabeth a a demigod of the brain not about sex. So I need you're advice."

Reluctantly, Percy nodded. He explained everything. He told her the basics, the pain, the sweating and the estimated waiting time.When Percy was done talking, he felt guilty. He felt like he had jusrt cheated on Annabeth. I could tell his heart felt stiff and wasn't beating regularly.

"Thanks." I said. "Percy, don't worry this wasn't something bad. It helped me. Even if you felt weird about it, We didn't do anything." With a dry smile, I got up and left.

Comments

This is dumb

Poppy Dill Poppy Dill
6/6/15

PLEASE TELLME WHEN YOU ARE WRITING MORE!!!!!!!!!!

it's good but rate it r not pg-13

It's good, but that's about it. You're off to a good start, but try being more descriptive when you write so the readers can have a better understanding of the surroundings. Also don't focus too much on the romance and forget addressing other issues-like Frank and Hazel being dead.

CaramelCalypso CaramelCalypso
3/26/15

@derpydeath101
I know this was back when I was beginning to write based on other characters. The story is rushed, inconsistent, barely had a plot and a lot of it isn't appropriate for children. If anything it was a story just cuz. But then again most authors get ideas eventually. This is a half-good story in my own opinion. Even my good ones on the website aren't that good. But yea thanks for the insight lol.

Beikeiai17 Beikeiai17
11/16/14