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Electric Kiss

Chapter 3

After midnight, Piper had came over. I had gotten the statuenof Zeus out of the way, cleaned up the bed and msde it more decent. She arrived out of nothingness. Amazed I stared at her to see, she only had on a silk dress like nighty. He hair was done good. I looked at her hand to see an Angels baseball cap. I smiled realizing she had tried her best.

"This is nice." She murmured. "I like it, it also looks like you've cleaned up. That's good because us children of Aphrodite are clean. Like OCD clean."I stared at her and pulled her in for a kiss. Suddenly, she turned me over and began pulling down my sweatpants. With a groan, I flipped her over, and began kissing her neck. i could feel her heartbeat. It was steady, but fast. Almost like she was ready. Swiftly I began to pull off her nighty. I quickly grabbed her and began to kiss her. First her neck, then her breast, then I began to get lower. I didn't know exactly what I was doing, but from all the things I did, I never once got a complaint. After what seemed like an hour, which in reality was about fivemminutes, I pulled down her shorts and began thrusting her. Pain crept in. At first, it was worst than being stabbed in the gut. Then it felt better.

I gazed at Piper, to notice her eyes were filled with pain, but satisfation. I grazed my body over her repeatedly until, my entire body felt tired. After a minute, she flipped me over and delt with me. Blacking out, I awoke to see we had slept for four hours. "Wake up." I whispered.

Piper did as I said, and rose up to realize, she had been sleepy ontop of me. "I'm sorry I fell asleep listening to you're hearbeat." She blushed. I nodded to see her rise. Piper quickly grabbed her nighty imbarrassed that I was watching her. Calmly I turned my head avoiding eye contact.

After she got dressed, we cuddled for a few minutes, before she put on her invisible cap and left. Still tired, I layed back down and fell asleep.

Comments

This is dumb

Poppy Dill Poppy Dill
6/6/15

PLEASE TELLME WHEN YOU ARE WRITING MORE!!!!!!!!!!

it's good but rate it r not pg-13

It's good, but that's about it. You're off to a good start, but try being more descriptive when you write so the readers can have a better understanding of the surroundings. Also don't focus too much on the romance and forget addressing other issues-like Frank and Hazel being dead.

CaramelCalypso CaramelCalypso
3/26/15

@derpydeath101
I know this was back when I was beginning to write based on other characters. The story is rushed, inconsistent, barely had a plot and a lot of it isn't appropriate for children. If anything it was a story just cuz. But then again most authors get ideas eventually. This is a half-good story in my own opinion. Even my good ones on the website aren't that good. But yea thanks for the insight lol.

Beikeiai17 Beikeiai17
11/16/14