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Electric Kiss

Chapter 4

After a few seconds, I reappeared in my bed. My entire body ached, but my mind thirsted for more. I could've lasted hours, in Jason's arms, but I just couldn't do that to him. Turning my head, I gazed at my bedside mirror. My hair was frizzy and I still had that uneasy look in my eyes, almost like my innocence had been stolen from me.

Thinking to my self, I wondered. Did he actually know what to do? Or was he just doing things that came natural. The more I thought about it, the more intrigued I became. My mother definitely got power from me tonight. She had been there observing in secret. She was feasting on the lust. The prudent odor that lingered around after. Closing m eyes, I fell asleep again, this time I had a dream.

I dreamed, I was in a beautiful palace, walking into a luxury room, I noticed a woman with divine beauty. She held a lovely complexion, a long white dress v cut with golden braclets and a head dress. Her hair was black, crazy and long. Her eyes were like a kelidoscope, shifting from green to blue to brown. The goddess was always beautiful, considering beauty was her hobby.

With a kind smile, Aphrodite turned to me. "Well, congradulations" She said. "I'm proud, to think it would take that long." Aphrodite, suddenly shifted the location of the dream. We were on earth now. In a Macy's store, as she ruffled through the racks. "So, you seem to be concerned about your feelings hun?" Aphrodite expressed."

"I want to know, why were you there?" I asked. Aphrodite took a long sleeve open cut blouse and glanced at it. "No that won't do. It just doesn't scream her." Placing the blouse back, she smiled.

"That wasn't me dear," Aphrodite sighed. "You see, as a daughter of mine, you might experience specific symptoms that are within the confines of lust. For example, you're sudden urge to just have sex. Even when you, yourself haven't even been there before."

"Do you know how Jason knew all that stuff?" I asked a bit uncomfotably. Aphrodite smiled, as she walked over to the next rack and picked up a pain of black tights. "Lovely, she will feel like it works." Carelessly, she glanced by the boots, to notice a pair of black fuzzy boots.

"Jason's a son of Zeus, he is a natural born leader, he knews many of things. Even if he never shows it, he's definitely a good asset to your camp. When did he learn that. He never did. He just assumed it was best to preform then." A whimsikle smile appeared on her face, as I wondered.

"Piper, your a daughter of the love goddess, remember everything that includes love with been difficult on you. It forces you to use your powers. The ability that was used then was either Amokinesis, or Desirbility." Gazing at Piper, Aphrodite smiled. "This is only the beginning, It will get harder before it gets easier."

Taking a deep breath, Piper woke up to see her sisters, getting ready. She smiled to notice Lily and Micheal getting dressed. Getting up, My entire lower back ached. The next thing I realized was that my mother had left me a gift. The clothes she had picked out were for me.

Comments

This is dumb

Poppy Dill Poppy Dill
6/6/15

PLEASE TELLME WHEN YOU ARE WRITING MORE!!!!!!!!!!

it's good but rate it r not pg-13

It's good, but that's about it. You're off to a good start, but try being more descriptive when you write so the readers can have a better understanding of the surroundings. Also don't focus too much on the romance and forget addressing other issues-like Frank and Hazel being dead.

CaramelCalypso CaramelCalypso
3/26/15

@derpydeath101
I know this was back when I was beginning to write based on other characters. The story is rushed, inconsistent, barely had a plot and a lot of it isn't appropriate for children. If anything it was a story just cuz. But then again most authors get ideas eventually. This is a half-good story in my own opinion. Even my good ones on the website aren't that good. But yea thanks for the insight lol.

Beikeiai17 Beikeiai17
11/16/14