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Suggestions (skipping the review again sorry guys):


Ok Leo is my Bro (can I call you that?)

So you ask me to review on your story let me say this:

You don't have a story here at all. The chapters that I read (like I said in the other review) if the story is as useless as a lamp don't write it.
So even doing like a drabble think about an actual story plot like if you wanted to do a little drabble thing ask people to give you ideas on what should happen (Look for ask blogs on Tumblr). Like,
Drabble q. ex.: Leo and Calypso reunion.

Then you do a little story about that! But seriously start thinking about you should write!

See Ya,
Eliza Rush

Notes

IF YOU WANT YOUR STORY REVIEWED PLEASE LET ME KNOW AND I'LL BE HAPPY TO DO IT! The waiting reappeared so it'll probably be a little while lolz)

Whew! I'm glad you guys stuck around even after that harsh review a couple of chapters back! I <3 you guys lolz.

@Leo is my Brother: If you have any questions or comments please let me know!