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Review:

So another story by Child of Nike! Again this story in the beginning stages so I'm not going to be able to get a complete read but I will say (Spoilers) so what I'm getting from this one is: Do you wanna know what's going on back home at Camp Half-Blood as Camp Jupiter prepares for war? READ THIS BOOK. And I will also say 'HOLY APOLLO CABIN BATMAN!!!'

Again mild cursing, but all in all it's a good book!
I'll give this one another 5.4 because it's so early in the book (and yes that curse)

Suggestions (*spoiler alert* enter at your own risk!):

Nothing really to what I said before in your last review but there is one thing.

CHARACTER! CHARACTER! CHARACTER!
You did well with Clarisse, but not so much with your own characters, if I didn't see the different POVs at the top I would think it was the same character! That's not a good place to be in! (trust me I had it and when I got back to the story I hated it!)
Now Jessica has a little difference than the others cause she scarred for life about the Titan War, but that's about it.
But here's a suggestion really start thinking about your characters and start thinking about every little detail about them and start trying to hear their voice in your head. Getting character sheets is a good idea and fill them out for yourself. (I can send you one if you want just let me know!)

So other than some minor grammar errors and what I said in the other review.
Good job and I hope people start loving your awesome stories!

Eliza Rush

Notes

Hey guys it's me again (yes I've updated a lot today lolz I just wanted to know down my waiting list so I wouldn't forget anyone)

IF YOU WANT ME TO REVIEW YOUR STORY AND GIVE SUGGESTIONS TO MAKE YOUR STORY BETTER PLEASE TELL ME AND I WILL BE MORE THAN HAPPY TO DO IT!

@ChildofNike If you have any questions or comments please tell me!