Reviews and Recommendations

Okay, BEFORE I START....When I review, I give you a certain number of points out of ten on subjects that I think are critical to the story. After I complete giving you points, I take them and average them out, and that's the rating that I give your story. If you fix what I point out, and I find it to be satisfactory to MY taste, I'll come back and edit the review and boot your points up so you have a better rating. Needless to say, I don't hold back from my opinions, so if I offend you, I apologize in advance. Just realize I am entitled to my own opinion, and if you aren't satisfied with what I have to say, I'm sorry.

OF VINES AND MEN

Cover picture, Characters, and Summary – 8
You have a great cover photo, obviously, *wink wink* and you have a good summary - COULD be better but I don't think that really matters. It's fine the way it is. AS for your characters - tell me about them! :D You don't have that many so make them a little more interesting rather than age and godly parent.

Plot - 10
Yas. Just YAS.
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS
Iloveyourplotsomuchohmygods

Chapter Length/Content – 10
Like the perfect length right there sister...

Basic Editing Skills – 10
Oh honey you're just fine :)

Overall Grammatical Structure – 9
I know you and I love your style of writing mostly because of how you use grammar. I think you're doing well!

Descriptive Elements – 7
Remember this if you don't remember anything else - SHOW, do not TELL. I think that's really your only issue with non-dialogue. Don't tell me Percy went back to his bunk, show me. Like how you'd watch a movie and they show you how something happens.

My Comprehension – 10
Um...Considering this is like one of my favs pretty sure this is a given.

Okay, so the rating for this story is...9.1!
<3 Echo

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