Reviews and Recommendations

Okay, BEFORE I START....When I review, I give you a certain number of points out of ten on subjects that I think are critical to the story. After I complete giving you points, I take them and average them out, and that's the rating that I give your story. If you fix what I point out, and I find it to be satisfactory to MY taste, I'll come back and edit the review and boot your points up so you have a better rating. Needless to say, I don't hold back from my opinions, so if I offend you, I apologize in advance. Just realize I am entitled to my own opinion, and if you aren't satisfied with what I have to say, I'm sorry.

Okay, SO. Percy Jackson. asked me to review her story. Here you go:

Once in a Blue Moon

Dude. YOU have an AWESOME story. Honestly, I think it is one of the coolest ideas EVER! I mean, Lupa and demigods and and WOW. Okay. Okay. *puts on cool face* So, I think your story is awesome (duh) and so far, the story line and people are getting along just fine (LOVE your first chapter, that was de BOMB) and I think that you should definatly continue on with this one.

So, POINTS!

Cover picture, Characters, and Summary – 9.5
Your cover picture was what gave me the hint that it had to deal with wolves, so kudos on that. Your summary is a little weak, but your character list is full and complete so I know exactly what people look like. Great job here!

Plot - 10
There are no words. It is pure amazingness.

Chapter Length/Content - 8
Your chapters were an average length, as many on this site are, and I always encourage making them long long LONG so in case you forget to update your readers won’t kill you as painfully, plus you can get more backround information in there.

Basic Editing Skills - 10
Again...no words. You’re pretty good in basic editing, so I have no suggestions, just keep going!

Overall Grammatical Structure – 9.5
YOU ALSO PUT IN DIALOGUE SPACES! THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU! OH MY GODS! *Claps happily* *dances* *throws confetti* Your grammar structure is fairly sound, just use some different words for dialogue exchange and check accidental capitalization here and there.

Descriptive Elements - 7
I understood what was going on, but there was never really a FULL description of the places and things they were doing, so I’d suggest throwing in a little more description. Set the scene! :D

My Comprehension – 10
DUDE. Still awesome.

Okay, so the rating for this story is...9.2. *grins* *subscribes*

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