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The Lost Sibiling of Olympus

By Hazel Zhang

Personally I think this story had major grammar issues. It was hard to read and the characters weren't true to their personalities. I had a hard time understanding what was going on, and well, the author may just need some time to learn but this one, I think is a no brainer. Don't Read!


Notes

If you have nay suggestions please feel free to comment. Everything is appreciated!

Comments

Can you review The Gods Will? It has only one review though but it is clean. It is not finished though.
who was i again who was i again
12/14/19

@Torissa Nikole
Okay kewl
It shall be up in an undetermined amount of time as this is portfolio week approaching so my time is very very very limited.

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
12/7/14

@theteenagefandom
Okay, thanks :)

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
12/7/14

@Torissa Nikole
I'll review it for you on my other reviews story. This one is super old and isn't frail in use anymore.

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
11/30/14

Are commissions closed?

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
11/29/14
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