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Fanfiction Reviews

Seeking Happiness

DO NOT READ THIS!!! Please. Don't read this one. I read part of the first chapter, and couldn't read anymore. It is sooo wrong.

Its has a super blurry plot, and way to much mature themes. The characters weren't true to who they really were, and they did stuff I would never have imagined them doing.

WARNING: DO NOT READ!!!!!!!

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Comments

Can you review The Gods Will? It has only one review though but it is clean. It is not finished though.
who was i again who was i again
12/14/19

@Torissa Nikole
Okay kewl
It shall be up in an undetermined amount of time as this is portfolio week approaching so my time is very very very limited.

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
12/7/14

@theteenagefandom
Okay, thanks :)

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
12/7/14

@Torissa Nikole
I'll review it for you on my other reviews story. This one is super old and isn't frail in use anymore.

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
11/30/14

Are commissions closed?

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
11/29/14
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