Fanfiction Reviews

I think this story is a pretty decent one, for the amount of I experiment writers on this site.

The plot is pretty good, and the author does a good job of describing. A few grammar problems, but not really bad. A few times I didn't know who was talking, but when I went back and read it, it made more sense.

Its rated PG-13 for language, and violence. There is the B-word, the S-word, and a few others, so if your uncomfortable with cussing (like me), this isn't the cleanest one.


Thanks,
Frost

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