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The New Half-Bloods of the Generation

This story has a nice plot, only two chapters so far, but a good start! I can't wait to review this one again when the author has written more.

Just a few grammar errors, could use some spacing I between paragraphs, a few misspelled words, but other than that, pretty good!

Its rated PG-13 for, I don't know. There's no cussing so far, but like I said, there's only two chapters. It may be for violence later in the story.

Thanks for reading!

Frost

Notes

Please leave your suggestions in the comments! I mean it. Do it. I need more stories to review!

Comments

Can you review The Gods Will? It has only one review though but it is clean. It is not finished though.
who was i again who was i again
12/14/19

@Torissa Nikole
Okay kewl
It shall be up in an undetermined amount of time as this is portfolio week approaching so my time is very very very limited.

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
12/7/14

@theteenagefandom
Okay, thanks :)

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
12/7/14

@Torissa Nikole
I'll review it for you on my other reviews story. This one is super old and isn't frail in use anymore.

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
11/30/14

Are commissions closed?

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
11/29/14
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