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Fanfiction Reviews

The Demigod Games

By S.D.A

This is pretty much a remake of the Hunger Games, but more Percy Jackson. It's really cool to see how the author makes it more Greek Mythology, instead of Techno.

One thing I'd suggest, make the characters more like they were in the books. Example, Annabeth WANTS to kill someone. She actually wouldn't want to do that. Little things like that.

Other than that, it has a great plot, good in description, a really good read!

Its PG-13 for violence, language, and gore.

Notes

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE suggest! I need more stories! PLEASE

Comments

Can you review The Gods Will? It has only one review though but it is clean. It is not finished though.
who was i again who was i again
12/14/19

@Torissa Nikole
Okay kewl
It shall be up in an undetermined amount of time as this is portfolio week approaching so my time is very very very limited.

@theteenagefandom
Okay, thanks :)

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
12/7/14

@Torissa Nikole
I'll review it for you on my other reviews story. This one is super old and isn't frail in use anymore.

theteenagefandom theteenagefandom
11/30/14

Are commissions closed?

Torissa Nikole Torissa Nikole
11/29/14