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A New Hero

A New Day

I learned this was a camp for people like me. Everyone thought I was a trick because I was a son of Hera. I didn’t care though I was having a bad day. My best friend was killed and it was my fault because I wasn't there. This camp also had a thing when a halfblood dies or hero as they called them, they have a big ceremony.

The next day I went down to the campfire, and they burned a pink shroud, for she was a child of Aphrodite. Nobody was here except for a teenager named Percy and one who talked to me yesterday, who I found out was named Annabeth.
As I walked to the the cabin I was assigned two.(haha this is not a typo) Percy came with me "I am sorry about your friend. I never seen a son of Hera the queen of Gods, and that’s because there’s never been one.” He said. For a second I thought he was joking, but he seemed pretty serious.

"What she only has daughters"? I asked, hoping that was just the case.
"No, she never had kids because she is the goddess of marriage. She even said she was devoted to Zeus the king of the god. I guess she got tired of him having kids though, so she decided to have one of her own.”

"So that means I am all alone in my cabin?”

" Ya, but don’t worry, it’s not always that bad."He said. Then he left. It took me awhile to sleep with my mom staring down at me, like she was disappointed or something. About ten I finally got some sleep, of course I had dreams though. In my dream I saw a woman with a classic Greek dress.

“Son be careful Zeus grows angry. You also have some of Zeus's children’s powers and some of your own. It’s true though you are my only halfblood child. I have to go be strong my son.” and with that I woke up.

Notes

I hope you enjoyed just give me suggestions if you want me to change any

Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14