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A New Hero

What Happened

Like every morning I walked to Percy's cabin he was sitting up on his bed like usual no one was there because Tyson was at Poseidon's palace. So I went up to Percy and gave him a kiss and big hug "So what did you and that new kid Nathan talk about"? But he just looked at me and I could tell he was still tired. "We talked how he was the only son of Hera" he said in a soft voice "Well do you want to get something to eat"? I asked "Where from the pavilion"? He said while yawning "How about the beach because that could wake you up and I already packed it so yay"? I said weirdly "Sure thing let me get dressed". When we got to the beach I set everything out while Percy took off his short and sandals after that I took off my shirt and shorts. He grabbed my hand and pulled me towards the ocean when we stopped we where over our stomachs. We played around a little bit then he hugged me and gave me a big kiss then we went back to the shore and ate we packed everything up Percy pulled out a little blue box then he opened it there was a ring that had a golden body with three gems on it there was a sapphire on the left a ruby on the right and a big light blue gem "Annabeth Chase I know we are only seventeen but next month we will be eighteen and this is custom made the only one that exist the middle one Is the gem of the sea and it is also a button so when you push it I will know your In trouble". "Oh my God's Percy Jackson, I will marry you" he smiled and once he got up I kissed him and gave him a big hug. While we walked back to camp we heard a very loud scream from the cabins area. We ran towards the cabins everyone was standing around in a circle. It was Nathan he screamed for no reason.

Notes

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Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14