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A New Hero

Something Good Happened To Me

As I looked around I noticed everyone standing around me because I screamed because my brain felt like it got shocked by something. Luckily Percy came over to me "what's wrong?" He asked kindly "Nothing, just something shocked me I am fine" "Are you sure,it sounds like it hurt" "YES I'm Fine" I snapped at Percy then I got up and everyone walked away even Percy I saw him and Annabeth walk off. So lunch time came around I went to the pavilion and I got my dinner and as everyone did I put some in the fire for an offering to my mother and I prayed not be lonely anymore and I was the last one to sit down and I heard some Aphrodite campers laugh at me "What are you looking at creep" one said. So I looked over and saw Percy hanging out with his sater friend and I saw this one girl sitting at Zeus is cabin table I think her name was Thalia. After dinner I walked over to Percy "I am sorry for snapping at you it was I had a bad headache" I said hoping he would forgive me "its fine I do the same things sometimes". After I got that off my chest I walked back to my cabin when I ran into Thalia "sorry" I said "its okay hey aren't you the son of Hera" she said "yah if you want me too go I will" "No its fine I saw what happened at diner you ok" "Yah I am normally alone" "You ain't alone you have Percy" "Yah but he usually is with Annabeth" "He is but they are a couple" "Maybe we can hangout sometime" "Yah I would enjoy that" "Well I better get going, good night" "Good night Thalia" so I went to bed and had a dream about her. "Yah but he is usually with Annabeth

Notes

Thanks for reading hope you enjoyed.

Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14