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A New Hero

Best Day Ever

After I talked to Nathan I walked to my cabin when I saw Jason my younger brother standing there "What Jason?" I asked rudely "I dont want you hanging around him" "Why?" "He is weird" "No,he is not weird he is nice and he is new and alone" "That doesn't mean anything and his mother is the goddess of marriage birth and dating" "Whatever" So after that argument I went to bed and didn't say a word. The next day I went to cabin two were Nathan slept I knocked on his door and I herd a voice "come in" so when I went in I saw him without a shirt and he had scars everywhere. "What happened?" "Nothing it happened along time ago" "Well you wanna get ready" "Sure,where are we going?" "I thought we could take a walk in the woods" "Ok,lets go" He got a shirt on and we walked towards the woods I made sure no one followed us"so why did you come to camp?" I asked"My mom told me too" "What about you?" "I ran away from home then i met Luke and Annabeth then we met Grover and we came here" "I ran away too" "Why?" "Dont tell anyone this, when I was five I witnessed my dad get murdered so I was put in a foster home then i ran away then i met that Aphrodite girl Sarah" "Well I'm sorry" "Its ok" then i didn't know what came over me I kissed him quickly then i pulled away "sorry" "Whats wrong all you did was kiss" "I know its just I thought you wouldn't like me" "Your right I dont like you i love you"then I put my arms around his neck then pulled him close then i kissed him on the lips even longer"I love you too Nathan" the dun set so we went back to camp "see you tomorrow" "You too good night Thalia" then i went to sleep dreaming about tomorrow "It's ok" then i didn't know what came o " "What about youctualy ran away from home then I met Luke and Annabeth then Grover and know I am here" "What happened to Luke?" "He turned into kronos the titan Lord then killed himself

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Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14