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A New Hero

War Games

I woke and got dressed and walked to Thalia cabin I knocked on the door and a boy opened the door "Hello?" I asked " Hi I am Jason Thalia brother" "Hi" then Thalia walked out of the bathroom "What's up" she said "Want to hang out?" "Sure catch you later Jason" we walked around and talked the Chiron the activity director and a centaur to the pavilion. So we walked there and we sat right beside Percy and Annabeth Chiron started talking " Well you all know we have a new camper the son of queen of the gods Hera as tradition we will play capture the flag so there will be two teams team one has Poseidon, Athena, Hermes and the Demeter cabins team two consists of Zeus, Aphrodite, Apollo, Hephaestus and Hades cabins and for Hera's cabin which team do you want to be on?" "I pick team two" "Okay its settled teams put your flag up and man your post you have five minutes" so we all split and Thalia told me to stay with her and I will be safe. So we got ready and we had some men guarded the flag and the horn blew me and Thalia went around the right side. I saw a guy come towards me I dodged him while he swung and I tripped him Thalia looked at me "Were did you learn to do that?" "I don't know" then Thalia was surrounded she looked at me again"Find the flag I got them" so I ran the direction we were going I found the flag and Annabeth and Percy were guarding it they saw me and Percy walked into the water and Annabeth put on her cap then she turned invisible I knew I had to take Percy first so I got into the water and then I couldn't move he came closer he swung twice I dodged then hit him in the head and he fell to his knees then I stayed in the water to see Annabeth I pulled her cap off then I saw her I put my sword to her throat she backed up then I grabbed there flag. I walked back to our side then we won so that night we had a party for winning then we walked back to our cabins "Good night Thalia" I said she looked at me "You know it doesn't have to end yet" she said she walked to my cabin we walked in and closed the door behind us.

Notes

Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14