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A New Hero

Questions

I woke up and went to Percy's cabin and knocked on the door Percy came to it "What?" It looked like he just woke up because his breath stunk "Are you just gonna say what to your seen to be bride?" "I mean yes honey?" I pushed him in his cabin "We need to talk about Nathan" "What's there to talk about? He beat us last night" "I know its just last night when he hit you why did it hurt you were in water you should of got back up but you fell why" "I don't know I got hit really hard then I felt weak" "Thats weird because when he turned around it was like he could see me because he looked into my eyes and his eyes were light grey but not like mine and he took my hat off without knowing were I was" "That is weird how about I watch him today and you watch Thalia because Jason said they were spinning a lot of time together" "Okay we meet here at sunset deal" "Deal"so I walked to were Thalia was "hey Thalia want to hang out?" "Sure" so we walked and talked about stuff "so how are you and Nathan?" "Good how do you know?" "Jason" "Oh" "I wanted to talk about him" "Sure what?" "Does he act weird around you?" "No why?" "Nothing" "Okay well Nathan said he made something for me for dinner so talk to you later" "Bye" "Bye see you later Annabeth" I walked back to Percy's cabin he was there "so what did you find out?" He asked "nothing" "You?" "Me nether he was fine its okay though" "Yah" he came over to me and massaged my back so I looked up and kissed him then I turned around and pushed him down on the bed we kept kissing I took off his shirt and he did it for me and took off my bra then we took our pants off and I took off his boxers and he took my panties off then so then we kept thrusting up and down and then we were a sleep my head was to his chest then I got up and put my clothes on then went to my cabin.

Notes

Sorry if it was too sexual.

Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14