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A New Hero

Bad Things Happen To Good People

It was breakfast time I was sitting at my table with Jason when Annabeth stood up "I have an announcement everyone" she said it with pride"Me and Percy are getting married" everyone started clapping. After that some of the Aphrodite girls were getting stuff prepared they wanted to get married in three days so they were working hard. I walked past the Demeter cabin working on the decorations and seating and I didn't do anything all day not even see Nathan. It was the day of Percy and Annabeth's wedding so I got prepared because I was her bridesmade and Grover was Percy's best man. After the wedding I saw Nathan walk in the woods I cot up to him "Nathan what's wrong?" He just looked at me "I just wished people loved me like them just because my mother is Hera and nobody likes her that means nobody likes me" I looked into his lightning blue eyes Dont worry what people say I love you for who you are" then i turned Artemis was there "Thalia Grace I am very disappointed you were my lieutenant for my hunters and you slept with a boy" she said discussed "Artemis I am sor -" she stopped me "No more" she raised her bow then she fired two arrows Nathan stepped in front of me he took the shots one in his shoulder and one in the leg "I hope your happy now your mortal" she vanished. "No why did you do that?" I yelled"For you" I took out the arrows and got him up he could barely walk so I took his arm over mine. I carried him to the pavilion were people were partying. Percy saw me he stopped dancing with Annabeth "Thalia what happened?" He looked shock "He was shot with two arrows protecting me, Artemis shot them!" I sat Nathan down "Get an Apollo kid!" Annabeth yelled and he came his name was Jack and he was new but he was good with medicine "Is he awake?" He looked professional "Barley!" He bent down to check him out "Nathan stay with us!" He yelled but Nathan closed his eyes.

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Comments

@Half-blood chronicler
Working on it I fixed chapter 2

SadieKane SadieKane
12/31/14

@ The Ghost King
That's simply amazing..Waiting for it

@Half-blood chronicler we are in the process of editing and revising.

The Ghost King The Ghost King
12/31/14

@The Lost hero and @ SadieKane
Yup It is a good story, but your writing style is kinda clumsy. There is something vital missing in your way of writing. The story has an amazing spark and it is a delicious idea, but please revise. Best of Luck and waiting for a revised version..

@The Lost hero
Ya I edited a little bit on ur grist chapter so u will have to look at it

SadieKane SadieKane
12/29/14