The Original Character Court
Alexia o'Riley
My girlfriend accidentally woke me up a lot earlier than I wanted to (It's 4 in the morning) and I can't go back to sleep (thanks a lot, babe.) I'm a little grumpy but I need something to do and seeing as to how I don't have any more requirements...
Basics
Name: Alexia o'Riley
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Birthday: March 17th
Ethnicity: British and Irish
[Does she have an accent?]
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Blue
Height: 1.75 m
Weight: 48 kg
Other physical descriptions: Has freckles. Small hips, long strong legs, thin arms.
Sexual orientation: Bisexual
Godly parent: Tyche
Mortal parent: Connor o'Riley
Other relationships:
Step Siblings: Mickey O'Riley and Kira O'Riley.
Friends: Jeanie, Callie, Annabeth, Kate, and Silena.
Enemies: Luke, and Drew.
Personality
Positive traits: Funny, she makes jokes all the time.
[Just because someone keeps making jokes, doesn't mean they're funny.]
Caring and Over-protective of friends and family.
Nice to most people.
Hyper.
[Not a personality trait]
Negative traits: Likes being in battle too much.
[Why?]
Isn't very careful of actions, so she makes mistakes quite often.
She pretends that she's a know-it-all.
Is too obsessed with four-leaf clovers.
[What does this have to do with anything? And why? Also, this is not a personality trait]
Fears/Phobias: Claustrophobic and Arachnophobic.
[Why?]
Fatal Flaw: Over-Confindent, she often thinks she can defeat the strongest enemies.
She also thinks she can get out of trouble, leading her into getting in to more trouble.
[k]
Combat-related questions
Camp: Half-blood
Weapon of choice: She preffers a spear,
[*prefers]
but her mom gave her a big axe.
[Why? Also, godly parents give their kids the weapon they're accustomed to (if they don't already have it).]
The axe's staff is green and has four-leaf clovers,
[What the hell is with all the clovers?]
the full axe is nearly 2 meters tall, and is foldable.
[By foldable do you mean that it's part of the mechanism of the axe? or magic?]
The axe's blade is made of Celestial Bronze. Because it's a magic axe (shocker) it can be folded into a cute shaped object that fits into a medium sized purse.
[Also, you're going to have to describe the axe more so I can determine if it's a Greek Axe or some other culture's axe.]
Other weapons: She can use a lot of weapons, but her favorite is a spear.
[Why can she use a lot of weapons? Not realistic unless she's a daughter of a War deity which Tyche is not.]
Powers and Abilities: Tychokinesis, the ability to manipulate probability. (AKA She can grant either good or bad luck to people).
[Is actually a pretty over-powered ability. Maybe you can dial it down to just increasing and decreasing probability by a minuscule amount but not good luck or bad luck.]
Backstory: Was born on St.Patrick's day, grew up with her father and older brother until she was 6, when her father re-married (he had a wife that died before he met Tyche, that's where Alexia's brother came from). Alexia loved her stepmom, up until Kira came along. Her father dumped her at Camp half-blood, scared that monsters would attack the newborn baby if Alexia stayed around.
Alexia was identified as a daughter of Tyche during her first Road-trip to the Empire State building, when Tyche 'casually' walked up and hugged Alexia, while saying how much she always wanted to meet her daughter.
[Why did she go to the Empire State? What were this girl's quests?]
Comments:
Lacks so much explanation. Has a lot of potential. A bit iffy with some details but I think you're off to a good start.
Final judgement: Fields of Asphodel
I am SO sorry for your loss. I havent lost too many people in my life, but i have lost enough to know its a horrible thing to go through. Are you going to continue The Original Character Court without her?
5/15/16