The Original Character Court
Samantha Hamper
Submitted by: Samantha Hamper
Basics
Name: Samantha Hamper (I changed my username to be her name)
[*narrows eyes* Well, if you did it because your fond of your character and not because it's a self-insert then okay]
Age: around 15
Gender: Female
Birthday: June 21st
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Brown
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 120
[or I'm assuming it's in lbs because if it's in kg, she's overweight. Guys, next time, put the goddamn units]
Other physical descriptions: Has a buff and strong body but no scars
[No scars why? Most demigods have scars by 15]
(Her story is under my name :)
[What?]
Godly parent: Enyo (Check story)
[I'm pretty sure I mentioned that I have no time to do that. If you're going to put spoilers put "spoilers!" right before it so other people won't read it. I don't have time to read that many fanfics anyway so I really don't give a crap. I just want well-detailed characters so I can give them the correct judgement.]
Mortal parent: Bill Hamper
Other relationships:
Emma her half cousin at camp half blood.
[? expound]
Personality
Positive traits: Thick headed but very sweet. If she likes you, you will know but if you get on her bad side she will kick your butt.
[Kick your butt immediately? This is also a very over-used "personality" type. Expound please so she doesn't sound so trope-y]
Negative traits: Stubborn, and slow to think act first think later type of thing.
[A very over-used demigod-trait. Please add more. She sounds pretty bland]
Fears/Phobias: Scared of loosing the people she cares about
[*losing.]
[Also, another very
Fatal Flaw: Same as Percy. She will do anything for her freinds.
[*groans* No wonder the other personality traits sounded familiar. This is practically fem!Percy.]
Combat-related questions
Camp: Half-Blood
Weapon of choice: Knife, Sword, Gun, her body. Any weapon she can get her hands on, She is very creative.
[uh-huh. Sure.]
Other weapons:
Powers and Abilities: She has a very well trained dog as a gift from her mother.
[why?]
and can master any weapon given to her with a few hours of training.
[nope nobody can do this]
Backstory: Read her story! I'm not spoiling it :D
[Then I'm not judging your character]
Comments:
Not enough details and the ones I actually got are just ????? and no.
Final judgement: Tartarus
Basics
Name: Samantha Hamper (I changed my username to be her name)
[*narrows eyes* Well, if you did it because your fond of your character and not because it's a self-insert then okay]
Age: around 15
Gender: Female
Birthday: June 21st
Hair color: Brown
Eye color: Brown
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 120
[or I'm assuming it's in lbs because if it's in kg, she's overweight. Guys, next time, put the goddamn units]
Other physical descriptions: Has a buff and strong body but no scars
[No scars why? Most demigods have scars by 15]
(Her story is under my name :)
[What?]
Godly parent: Enyo (Check story)
[I'm pretty sure I mentioned that I have no time to do that. If you're going to put spoilers put "spoilers!" right before it so other people won't read it. I don't have time to read that many fanfics anyway so I really don't give a crap. I just want well-detailed characters so I can give them the correct judgement.]
Mortal parent: Bill Hamper
Other relationships:
Emma her half cousin at camp half blood.
[? expound]
Personality
Positive traits: Thick headed but very sweet. If she likes you, you will know but if you get on her bad side she will kick your butt.
[Kick your butt immediately? This is also a very over-used "personality" type. Expound please so she doesn't sound so trope-y]
Negative traits: Stubborn, and slow to think act first think later type of thing.
[A very over-used demigod-trait. Please add more. She sounds pretty bland]
Fears/Phobias: Scared of loosing the people she cares about
[*losing.]
[Also, another very
Fatal Flaw: Same as Percy. She will do anything for her freinds.
[*groans* No wonder the other personality traits sounded familiar. This is practically fem!Percy.]
Combat-related questions
Camp: Half-Blood
Weapon of choice: Knife, Sword, Gun, her body. Any weapon she can get her hands on, She is very creative.
[uh-huh. Sure.]
Other weapons:
Powers and Abilities: She has a very well trained dog as a gift from her mother.
[why?]
and can master any weapon given to her with a few hours of training.
[nope nobody can do this]
Backstory: Read her story! I'm not spoiling it :D
[Then I'm not judging your character]
Comments:
Not enough details and the ones I actually got are just ????? and no.
Final judgement: Tartarus
I am SO sorry for your loss. I havent lost too many people in my life, but i have lost enough to know its a horrible thing to go through. Are you going to continue The Original Character Court without her?
5/15/16