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Wizards?

Not again...

It was my fifth year at Hogwarts when the 'incident' happened. I had just stepped off the Hogwarts Express, when suddenly, a boy ran past me. I couldn't see his face, but noticed a mop of curly brown hair. I thought he was just a lost first year, so I walked up to him, trying not to lose my temper. "Hi," I said, "Are you looking for Hagrid? If you are, he went that way." I looked him up and down, inspecting him. He's not a first year is he? I think. "Uh... Hi," he said, "I'm Leo. I was looking for my friends. There's nine of them." I sigh. "What do they look like?" I ask. He started explaining them, but I couldn't concentrate. I started helping him look. After five minutes of looking, we found them. I then led them to the wagons to go to the Great Hall for the feast. Little did I know that these people would be good friends.

Notes

Short but sweet. I guess...

Comments

Please Update. You have the start of a really interesting story here.

@WritingDreams
I need to work on that. I was rushing and now that you mention it, I'll get working on it ASAP!

Greek Freak Greek Freak
1/31/15


@WritingDreams
I completely agree!

Quite appreciatting. I really like the way you express how your characters feel, but I would prefer it if the chapter was longer and made more sense. Also you may should give a little more information about your OC and describe character's appearances with more details. Aside from this, the story seems interesting.
Im interested into reading some more.

WritingDreams WritingDreams
1/30/15