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Darkness Reveals

Author's Note

Hey Guys!

My apologies for not updating recently. I'm going to be revising all my stories and most likely changing them. I have been rereading them and the craftsmanship of my writing was horrible. Lol. Anyways, just thought I would let all of you know. :)

Tah tah for now,
-A.D.R.

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Comments

@Constrictor
Oh, thanks. Sorry if she does sound OP but she was even more before I rewrote the story. I love your new story! It sounds awesome!

A.D.R. A.D.R.
1/14/16

@A.D.R.
Haha sorry for sounding rude, that tends to happen in school. A Mary Sue is a name for a character who is OP or Over-Powered. Now I was just thinking that, because I'm very nit-picky, but I love the story!

Constrictor Constrictor
1/14/16

@Constrictor
Thanks for the feedback. May I ask, what is a Mary Sue or who is it?

A.D.R. A.D.R.
1/14/16

I don't mean to sound rude, but this character is starting to sound like an Mary Sue. Scar across right eye? Daughter of the big three? Charm that she wouldn't get attacked by monsters?

Constrictor Constrictor
1/14/16

I love it!

Chelsea_Delos Chelsea_Delos
1/14/16
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