There's Nowhere I Can Hide
Chapter one
I woke up to feel a harsh pain in the back of my head i sat up and groaned. when i felt the ground with my hands stopped.
its a forest. I thought i looked up and sure enough i was right.
The entire ground was filled with grass. The thick mysterious fog loomed infront of the tall skyscraping trees. The trees were so tall i couldnt see the sky. It apeared as if no one was there except for me but i felt something watching me.
"spooky..." I said aloud. I stood up and brushed of the dirt from my SPQR CAMP JUPITER shirt and and looked ahead of me.
I was about to take a step when i heard it. SNAP! i turned around to see something in the distance. i shut my eyes and shook my head but shure enough the dark hooded figure was standing infront of me. I couldnt see its entire face but i could see its mouth. Its teeth were barred with long fangs and blood driping down its mouth. I looked up to where its eyes would be placed and they were there, dark red peircing eyes staring at me.
I wanted to run but i was frozen and in my mind all i could think was,i'm going to die today...
The beast lifted up its hend and touched my shoulder. A sharp peircing pain flowed through my body but i couldn't scream no matter how much i wanted to.
I looked down too see blood coming down out of my shoulder and in a few moments we were standing in a giant pool of blood.
The monster spread its fingers out and held it up to its head so i could see its claw like fingers with more blood drippimng down them. i moved my sight back to those eyes the eyes that i could tell just said DEATH all over them. It smiled and lunged at me.
I immediatly sat up when i awoke i clenched my hand over my heart to feel it beating faster than i could run.I could feel sweat dripping down my back and i moved my hand over to my shoulder. I sighed in relief as i noteced no blood.
"NATHAN!"someone yelled. I was so startled that hit my head against the roof of the room. I'm just gonna say this. being the tyallest in the fith cohort and having the top bunk...Worst idea anyone has come uo with.
"what!" i replied sort of annoyed. A short boy walked out of the bottom bunk and looked at me. he was a small kid with light brown wavy hair and brown eyes, his name is noah.
"Were late!" he screamed. i quckly slipped my clothes on, grabbed my chest armor,helmet,andspear and raced outside to the tranning area with noah jogging beside mecarrying his scythe that death had given him.
"I thought you were having a heart attack last night. you know." i stayed silent and he ran in front of me and stopped. His brown eyes were looking at me almost the same as the monster's had. The thought of the eyes sent a shive down my spine. I gritted my teeth trying to hold back a scream.
noah dragged his feet across the ground and stared at them. he sighed and looked back at me. "I-I'm scared for you i dont want to lose you.." i looked at him and bent down so that i was almost his hight.
I sighed and looked at him. "I'm not going to leave you not as long as i live you understand ." Just then the horn blew and i stood and turned back to him then smiled
"come on." i said enthustiasticlly. "let's go get some delicious foods!"
Noah smilled then shook his head and ran off infront of me towards the mess hall to eat dinner I smilled But i could get the thought out of my head that something was going to go horribly wrong.
its a forest. I thought i looked up and sure enough i was right.
The entire ground was filled with grass. The thick mysterious fog loomed infront of the tall skyscraping trees. The trees were so tall i couldnt see the sky. It apeared as if no one was there except for me but i felt something watching me.
"spooky..." I said aloud. I stood up and brushed of the dirt from my SPQR CAMP JUPITER shirt and and looked ahead of me.
I was about to take a step when i heard it. SNAP! i turned around to see something in the distance. i shut my eyes and shook my head but shure enough the dark hooded figure was standing infront of me. I couldnt see its entire face but i could see its mouth. Its teeth were barred with long fangs and blood driping down its mouth. I looked up to where its eyes would be placed and they were there, dark red peircing eyes staring at me.
I wanted to run but i was frozen and in my mind all i could think was,i'm going to die today...
The beast lifted up its hend and touched my shoulder. A sharp peircing pain flowed through my body but i couldn't scream no matter how much i wanted to.
I looked down too see blood coming down out of my shoulder and in a few moments we were standing in a giant pool of blood.
The monster spread its fingers out and held it up to its head so i could see its claw like fingers with more blood drippimng down them. i moved my sight back to those eyes the eyes that i could tell just said DEATH all over them. It smiled and lunged at me.
I immediatly sat up when i awoke i clenched my hand over my heart to feel it beating faster than i could run.I could feel sweat dripping down my back and i moved my hand over to my shoulder. I sighed in relief as i noteced no blood.
"NATHAN!"someone yelled. I was so startled that hit my head against the roof of the room. I'm just gonna say this. being the tyallest in the fith cohort and having the top bunk...Worst idea anyone has come uo with.
"what!" i replied sort of annoyed. A short boy walked out of the bottom bunk and looked at me. he was a small kid with light brown wavy hair and brown eyes, his name is noah.
"Were late!" he screamed. i quckly slipped my clothes on, grabbed my chest armor,helmet,andspear and raced outside to the tranning area with noah jogging beside mecarrying his scythe that death had given him.
"I thought you were having a heart attack last night. you know." i stayed silent and he ran in front of me and stopped. His brown eyes were looking at me almost the same as the monster's had. The thought of the eyes sent a shive down my spine. I gritted my teeth trying to hold back a scream.
noah dragged his feet across the ground and stared at them. he sighed and looked back at me. "I-I'm scared for you i dont want to lose you.." i looked at him and bent down so that i was almost his hight.
I sighed and looked at him. "I'm not going to leave you not as long as i live you understand ." Just then the horn blew and i stood and turned back to him then smiled
"come on." i said enthustiasticlly. "let's go get some delicious foods!"
Noah smilled then shook his head and ran off infront of me towards the mess hall to eat dinner I smilled But i could get the thought out of my head that something was going to go horribly wrong.
Okay, the plots good but work on spelling and punctuation. Capitalize each word after a period. Always check you spelling, other then that, I like it! Write more chapters!
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