On the streets - Comments

@ivenomeansbywhichtodefend
Thank you for the critique and your right, after not seeing this for a while I realize that this is true. (Sorry I took so long to reply)

I really really like your story and the way it's going, but I am going to critique a little. You need to slow down a bit. You've got all these ideas jumbled into your head, and you're writing them so fast that a lot of the detail which makes it flow isn't getting in. But I really like the direction this is heading! I'm really excited to read more like bouncing in my seat kind of excited

Nice

I love it please update

This is good as!

This is dumb

@I Am Aphrodite
Thanks

I absolutely love this story.

Soo sorry!!! I was busy (Me and my friend are writing books) And i swear I will update from now on

Omg do not leave with a Clift haner plz wright mor I love love love it

OMG I can't wait to read more!!

OMG I can't wait to read more!!

@I.Am.Aphrodite.
i plan on it

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

I luv it!!!!

I really like it! Good going!

Nice I love it keep updating

Thanks you guys I will upgrade it

AWESOME!!! I <3 it!! Keep it up!