Reviews and Recommendations

Okay, BEFORE I START....When I review, I give you a certain number of points out of ten on subjects that I think are critical to the story. After I complete giving you points, I take them and average them out, and that's the rating that I give your story. If you fix what I point out, and I find it to be satisfactory to MY taste, I'll come back and edit the review and boot your points up so you have a better rating. Needless to say, I don't hold back from my opinions, so if I offend you, I apologize in advance. Just realize I am entitled to my own opinion, and if you aren't satisfied with what I have to say, I'm sorry.

Resurrected

This may or may not be slightly biased since this is one of my FAVORITE stories on this entire site and I love it to pieces. It's great. You should go read it. Now.
So, POINTS!

Cover picture, Characters, and Summary – 9.5
Your cover picture is a little lacking in intrigue, but your summary and characters were awesome and complete.

Plot - 9.5
One of the things that caught my eye almost immediately when you published your first two stories is that you weren't just bringing back old characters, but you were integrating them into a unique plot from their own POV and you threw in some of your OC's too. It's just wonderfully done. However, I do have to say that I personally struggle with seeing dead characters come back because they usually don't have a good place and it's just super awkward fitting them back in, but you did excellently.

Chapter Length/Content - 10
PERFECT. Just perfect.

Basic Editing Skills – 10
What could be wrong....everything is so beautifully edited!!

Overall Grammatical Structure – 10
Yay! There's another writer out there who's strong in grammatical structures and wording. Kudos on that.

Descriptive Elements - 9.5
Great. You did wonderfully with spacing out descriptive words and even your imagery, but I do have to say that on occasion (not very much) you sort of left me hanging and wondering what or where I was because your descriptions weren't fully completed.

My Comprehension – 10
Perfect.

Okay, so the rating for this story is... 9.8!
<3 Echo

Notes

(Great work as usual, Daniel.)