Reviews and Recommendations

Okay, BEFORE I START....When I review, I give you a certain number of points out of ten on subjects that I think are critical to the story. After I complete giving you points, I take them and average them out, and that's the rating that I give your story. If you fix what I point out, and I find it to be satisfactory to MY taste, I'll come back and edit the review and boot your points up so you have a better rating. Needless to say, I don't hold back from my opinions, so if I offend you, I apologize in advance. Just realize I am entitled to my own opinion, and if you aren't satisfied with what I have to say, I'm sorry.

Demi-Titans by gwolfie

I like the start or your story - you've got a really neat idea, it just needs a little expansion and a little help.
So, POINTS! Each is scored out of 10.

Cover picture, Characters, and Summary – 6
Your cover photo is great and so is your summary, though it could use a little work, but your characters definitely need a little more done to them.

Plot - 10
This is fresh and unique from what I've read.

Chapter Length/Content - 5
The chapters were wayyy too short, BUT they did have some neat things included in them.

Basic Editing Skills – 7
I say this to everyone...BUT check your capitalization, punctuation, and spelling for the usual errors!

Overall Grammatical Structure – 5
You have quite few errors in your text, but they aren't so bad that I stumble my way through your story. There's just a lot of misspelling, capitalization/punctuational errors...just enough to annoy me and give you a lower rating.

Descriptive Elements - 6
You use different words to convey your point - you don't overuse a lot of the normal everyday words. However, the different words you do choose to use can be overdone slightly. Otherwise good job on stepping up!

My Comprehension – 8
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Okay, so the rating for this story is...7.8! Nice work.
<3 Echo

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