Reviews and Recommendations

Okay, BEFORE I START....When I review, I give you a certain number of points out of ten on subjects that I think are critical to the story. After I complete giving you points, I take them and average them out, and that's the rating that I give your story. If you fix what I point out, and I find it to be satisfactory to MY taste, I'll come back and edit the review and boot your points up so you have a better rating. Needless to say, I don't hold back from my opinions, so if I offend you, I apologize in advance. Just realize I am entitled to my own opinion, and if you aren't satisfied with what I have to say, I'm sorry.

Okay, SO. RunningGodling3 asked me to review a story. Here you go:

The Chloe Chronicles: The Lost Goddess

I love your story...it’s just a little hard to understand because of how the writing isn’t divided up into paragraphs, but it’s an interesting read. J
So, POINTS!

Cover picture, Characters, and Summary – 8
You were missing your cover photo, but your summary was good (could use a little work) and your characters seemed complete.
Plot - 10
It is very intriguing....and unusual (plus you created a new main character :D )

Chapter Length/Content - 10
These were plenty long. Plenty. Keep that up.

Basic Editing Skills – 10I say this to everyone...BUT check your capitalization, punctuation, and spelling for little TINY errors!

Overall Grammatical Structure –10
You need to add in dialogue spaces SO it’s easier to see who’s talking. BUT the rest? It’s awesome. Hardly anything wrong with your grammar at all, so KUDOS ON THAT!!!! :D

Descriptive Elements - 9
Dude. NICELY DONE. (I call everyone dude. Sorry...) I love how it paints a picture!!! You’re definitely one of the best writers (using this literary device) and I think this is one of your strongest points! Great job!

My Comprehension – 10
Aside from the dialogue...I understood everything!

Okay, so the rating for this story is...8.9!
WELL DONE!!!

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