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Nico and Reyna's quest with the Athena Parthenos

Nico. The biggest cyclopes to ever see

I woke up in the morning seeing Reyna curled up by me asleep, I put my aviator jacket and gently shook her should "hey...Reyna... wake up" she opened her eyes slowly "lets go get some more food" I said to her, she nodded and wrote a note so Hedge wouldn't freak out on us when we came back and we walked to restaurant in the nearest town. We ordered almost as soon as we sat down, I took my jacket off feeling to hot in it and Reyna had the same idea "we still haven't figured out how to get at Hedge for calling us cupcakes" I said to her. It was silent for about 3 minutes before answering "duct tape him to the parthenos?" she asked, I nodded and smirked. We kept talking longer than I ever have to anyone ever since I found out I was a demigod and to be honest, I felt something I haven't even came close to feeling for the same amount of time as well, it was... happiness. We ate our food, paid, and left. Reyna stopped, I did the same when I heard something I never expected from Reyna, I heard her whimper like a scared puppy and then I saw why. It was the biggest Cyclopes ever, at least 20 feet tall(or more)huge hands that were bigger than me, and one giant singly blood red eye. I glanced at Reyna and she looked at me "I'll be a decoy and then you go head on with him" I said to her, I ran straight at him, sword drawn, "hey... you giant ox I'm over here" I shouted at him. I stepped back two feet, he pulled out a spear as tall as him,(first for me that a Cyclopes didn't have a bat)and smacked me with the shaft and sent me flying into the nearest brick building, cracking the wall. Reyna screamed my name as I had the Cyclopes wrap a huge hand around my neck and the rest of my body "come get me you one eyed giant!!!" Reyna shouted at him, he dropped me and went after her, smacking her the same way he did to me, then came back to me picking me back up the same way squeezing my body until I couldn't even cough as he kept squeezing but I was doing my best to stay awake making him squeeze harder every time I able to keep my eyes open...it was my living example of being in The Fields of Punishment.

Notes

sorry its short, im going to focus this more on Reyna's point of now for the battle... please read more and give me a better reason to keep updating :)

Comments

Over 1,000 views in atleast 3 weeks! Wow im suprised people like to read my story

update plz

heracles heracles
7/9/14

OH and don't forget spelling/punctuation/grammar!! :)

This is neat! I would just offer my advice to break it up into paragraphs, especially when people are talking, so it's easier to see what's happening!
:)

Yay! :)

Phoebe Phoebe
6/23/14