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Nico and Reyna's quest with the Athena Parthenos

Nico. Reyna suprises me

I woke up feeling now knowing how fruit felt when it was made to juice. Then I noticed my head was in someone's lap and also stroking my hair. I opened my eyes seeing Reyna which surprised me a lot "NICO!!!" she screamed with delight and sadness like she thought I was dead(she probably did) as she gently pulled me into a hug, my face buried in her shoulder as she kept her arms around me for a count of 8 long deep breaths before pulling away holding me at arms length tears pouring down her face, I smiled. Feeling like someone cared about me for once, someone helped me, and wanted to help me I felt happy, happier than I've ever felt before "y-you got crushed by a c-Cyclopes...stabbed through the chest... how...how are you alive" she said as more tears went down her face, I made a weak smile "because I felt some people were to important to leave" I said to her feeling happy she cared, she looked confused probably thinking I meant my sister Hazel "get some more sleep" she said in a stern voice but smiled at me. I smiled back and noticed how small my voice was "o-ok" I said as I laid back down putting my head back in her lap as she started to stroke my hair back. Honestly I was happier than ever as I smiled falling back asleep. When I woke up I say Reyna was curled into a ball by me asleep as I shook her should "Reyna... come on we have one shadow travel until we're done" I said to her as she woke up, "ok... lets get this done with" then we noticed Hedge was gone so I did something that would drain more than one shadow travel has done, I took Reyna's hand as I imagined Hedge, the parthenos, me, and Reyna, I imagined camp half blood with the fleece and the dragon Peleus, the big house, the cabins, with all the tree's and the strawberry fields. This was taking more than thirty minutes trying to transport something with me that wasn't even near me as Reyna's hand trembled in mine, I glanced at her pulling her into my arms as she kissed my cheek before laying her head in my chest as I felt her tremble but slightly calming down as we both closed are eyes passing out as soon as we got spit out of the darkness.

Notes

I'm going to leave these 5 chapters until I see how much people want me to update it so I know everyone loves it so I would love to write more :) please rate and comment on if I should keep writing

Comments

Over 1,000 views in atleast 3 weeks! Wow im suprised people like to read my story

update plz

heracles heracles
7/9/14

OH and don't forget spelling/punctuation/grammar!! :)

This is neat! I would just offer my advice to break it up into paragraphs, especially when people are talking, so it's easier to see what's happening!
:)

Yay! :)

Phoebe Phoebe
6/23/14