Queen Reviews
Dear Fanfiction
Ok this is going to be hard to be harsh like requested because this was the first book I ever read on this site and I love it, so here goes nothing!
Plot- There is no specific plot, my pre-made questions are not going to work with this review it seems xD
Anyways still the main idea of the book is unique from anything I've ever seen on any other writing sites I'm on, and I don't think it should change really... but... Once again you asked me to be harsh... ah screw it let me be honset: Dear fanfiction is amazing, the main idea of it is original and awesome!
9/10
Characters- Ok this is where the critisism comes in! (Not really, I love this book too much to be harsh against it I'm so sorry)
The characters even though yes you have captured them really well... there's just something inside of me (I've gotten others to agree with me on this) that this is not how the characters would react. I mean like yeah sure Chiron would totally react to Lemons that way but wouldn't he also like rage a bit? Or get paranoid and install security cameras around camp? You should maybe write about what they do AFTER they answer the queston, if you want to of course!
8/10
Grammar- I don't remember seeing any mistakes and all the sentences made sence, and I really didn't have to read over anything a gazillion times to understand what it meant.
10/10
So over all I give an 8/10.
Notes
So yeah don't hate me for giving a good review, the next one I haven't read yet so it's gonna be more serious!
Name: Alexandra Orlova
Story Description: Alexandra is an Exorcist (demigod who works in the Underworld). She wakes up after a horrible fight which she doesn't remember and finds herself in Camp Half-Blood.
Link: http://www.percyjacksonfanfiction.com/Story/84022/Alexandra-Orlova/
How many stars would you give it?: A solid 8.5
Did you read the rules?: I wouldn't be writing this form if I hadn't
Have or will you read any other reviews?: Sure, why not?
Password: Vanilla (I hope it is not wrong)
OK... Just so you know, I tend to avoid doing spelling errors, but there might be one that I missed, so sorry in advance.
Hope I impress you or something and that you're still active on this site
11/26/16