The Original Character Court

It's midnight. I've been trying to post this for over an hour. And the damn website won't load properly so my review kept getting deleted. It's seriously pissing me off.

Basics
Name: Jaden Samson
Age: 11
[Be careful with this age.]
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: American
[American isn't an ethnicity. It's a nationality, afaik.]
Hair color: Bright orange
[The fuck?]
Eye color: Blue
[okay?]
Height: 4 foot
Weight: 100 lb
[kid's obese]
Other physical descriptions: Lean [not according to the weight-height ratio] and has burns on the arms and face [please explain how he got those. And how extensive are those burns?]
Sexual orientation: Hetrosexual
[*Heterosexual]

Personality
Positive traits: Friendly and positive and always tries to help out whenever he can

Negative traits: Extremely irritated when the smallest details go wrong

Fatal Flaw: Is extremely reliant and plans almost any relevant/possible situations and refuses to change the plan

[Personality is a little generic. Though I can see how the fatal flaw can be fatal.]

Family and Background
Godly Parent: Hephaestus
Mortal Parent: Vivian Samson

Backstory: When he was very young his father died in a fiery explosion with him being the only one to survive but giving him permanent burns on his arms and face. He wandered around for years using his inventions to survive. [How old was he again? Even though he's a demigod, his inventions still won't be that spectacular.] Until when he became 11 years old he was attacked by monsters and barely escaped. Soon afterwards he was found by a satyr and taken to camp half blood. He was extremely skilled at building mechanical machines and soon went on a quest for which he he build weapons and helped make plans.
[Hate to break it to you but planning and strategy isn't exactly the forte of Hephaestus kids. Those are traits of Athena/Bellona kids. I mean, sure other demigods would be able to do that (especially if they're Roman) but in CHB, those tasks would be delegated to Athena and possibly Ares kids.]

Combat-related questions
Camp: Half-Blood
Weapon of choice: Mechanical Crossbow
Other weapons: Grenades ,tiny robots forming suits of armor
[tiny robots? Suits of Armor? No.]
Powers and Abilities: Controls machines ,talks to machines normal hephestus powers
[Talks to machines? I get the control machines part but maybe not the talk to machines part. Could you elaborate on the normal Hephaestus powers?]

Comments:
Please look at the OCs in Isles of the Blessed to get an idea of the kind of OCs that I'd deem good.

Final judgement: Fields of Punishment

Notes