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Hi! My name is Leo Valdez. Now that the war with Queen Dirt Face is over, I decided to tell my untold part of the story. If most of you read the Heroes of Olympus series, you would know that my mom died when I was 8 years old, and I bounced around from foster home to foster home. But you don't know all the details, and what happened after the war with Gaea.
I really really like your story and the way it's going, but I am going to critique a little. You need to slow down a bit. You've got all these ideas jumbled into your head, and you're writing them so fast that a lot of the detail which makes it flow isn't getting in. But I really like the direction this is heading! I'm really excited to read more like bouncing in my seat kind of excited
@ivenomeansbywhichtodefend
Thank you for the critique and your right, after not seeing this for a while I realize that this is true. (Sorry I took so long to reply)
11/9/16