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The Return of Fire

Summary

As Leo Valdez and Calyso return, the demigods of Camp Half Blood are surprised yet happy to see him and his new "friend". (HeadCanon)

Characters

Annabeth Chase

Annabeth Chase

Calypso

Calypso

Chiron

Chiron

Frank Zhang

Frank Zhang

Hazel Levesque

Hazel Levesque

Jason Grace

Jason Grace

Leo Valdez

Leo Valdez

Nico di Angelo

Nico di Angelo

Percy Jackson

Percy Jackson

Piper Mclean

Piper Mclean

Chapters

Comments

Sorry Son of Hermes I didn't reply quicker, I'm not on this site very much, but Thank You SO SO MUCH for giving me some positive feed back, and I would LOVE for you to be my beta reader because I need one badly

Kaelyn Kaelyn
8/2/15

From the one chapter I read this is a great story! It was a good length, great dialogue, and you portrayed the characters marvelously. I would love to be your "beta reader" and help improve your fanfiction.
~Son of Hermes

Son of Hermes Son of Hermes
7/10/15

Nice! Like it so far, but you should probably get a beta-reader to help you fix up the formatting. Also, you clumped some of the dialogue together into large paragraphs when they should be separated by a new paragraph.

Other than that, your writing is really good. You've got lots of potential. Everyone's within the boundaries of their character, and you've done a fantastic job. Keep it up! Definitely subscribing!

-Araneae Siqua.

Emrys Holmes Emrys Holmes
7/9/15