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On the streets

chapter 9

Just our luck. As soon as I get rid of one annoying monster, something worse comes up. Sailing, I saw a ship. On the side of it, I saw what was probably it's name-Princess Andromeda. Percy and Annabeth mentioned this before.
"Oh gods" Percy exclaimed "I thought i blew up this ship last year.Why me?
"Hey" Coach Hedge was calm about it "At least we get to blow up some monsters. Come on cupcakes. We got a ship to blow"
"Leo" Allie demanded "Go get me a bunch of Greek fire"
I got the Greek fire, and handed it to Allie. "Come on" She started heading to the boat. "Percy, a few currents would be helpful".
We got to the Princess Andromeda Via tsunami. And there, still on the wave, tossed the Greek flames at the boat.
"Come on" I was worried, we tried, as fast as we could, to get back to the Argo 2, but nothing could get away, I was knocked out, along with Allie
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About an hour later, I woke up, and right before I passed out again, I saw her face. Gleaming in the sunlight, her beautiful bronze hair carelessly whisked away. But how? No one came to Ogigia two times.
But yet, Calypso was there. And I was pretty sure that I wasn't dead.

Notes

Comments

@ivenomeansbywhichtodefend
Thank you for the critique and your right, after not seeing this for a while I realize that this is true. (Sorry I took so long to reply)

I really really like your story and the way it's going, but I am going to critique a little. You need to slow down a bit. You've got all these ideas jumbled into your head, and you're writing them so fast that a lot of the detail which makes it flow isn't getting in. But I really like the direction this is heading! I'm really excited to read more like bouncing in my seat kind of excited

Nice

Constrictor Constrictor
1/23/16

I love it please update

Kat1st Kat1st
11/28/15

This is good as!

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11/26/15