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On the streets

Chapter 10

"Leo...But how? No one finds ogygia twice?" Calypso stared at me.
"I kinda beat the odds I guess. Anyway, How Have you been. Long time no see."
I saw the raft coming. I guess it was better than the first time. At least she couldn't let me go.
"Well" Calypso looked away. "I guess your raft's here. At least you kept your promise."
"Calypso" I started "You know I can't"
"Leo, you have to, I'm stuck here, you, you have to go. We have different paths that seem to keep passing."
"Calypso" I started.
She pulled me into a kiss, and i returned the favor. Then all of a sudden I was pushed into a raft and slowly sailing away.
"Leo, I'm sorry, I really am, bbut, this is what you have to do."
Then Calypso's face drifted away, and I fell asleep.

Notes

Comments

@ivenomeansbywhichtodefend
Thank you for the critique and your right, after not seeing this for a while I realize that this is true. (Sorry I took so long to reply)

I really really like your story and the way it's going, but I am going to critique a little. You need to slow down a bit. You've got all these ideas jumbled into your head, and you're writing them so fast that a lot of the detail which makes it flow isn't getting in. But I really like the direction this is heading! I'm really excited to read more like bouncing in my seat kind of excited

Nice

Constrictor Constrictor
1/23/16

I love it please update

Kat1st Kat1st
11/28/15

This is good as!

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11/26/15