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On the streets

chapter 2

That night I had the same dream I have been having for the last few days. It was about flames shooting up around me, but they did not seem to want to harm me, so I follow them. Soon I'm in the clouds, and in front of me is a huge Greek ship, except with a dragon in the front. The same ship I drew one day when my mean old baby sitter, Tia Ciada was watching me. The same day she put me in the flames for a nap.
I wake up with a start. Next to me, Allie was still sleeping soundly, but something still felt weird. I got up and looked around. All of a sudden, out of no where, a giant black dog jumped out at me. Allie shook up and she got the hint. She got up, and together, we ran into the darkness into who knows where.

Notes

Not all of the chapters are going to be this short, sorry

Comments

@ivenomeansbywhichtodefend
Thank you for the critique and your right, after not seeing this for a while I realize that this is true. (Sorry I took so long to reply)

I really really like your story and the way it's going, but I am going to critique a little. You need to slow down a bit. You've got all these ideas jumbled into your head, and you're writing them so fast that a lot of the detail which makes it flow isn't getting in. But I really like the direction this is heading! I'm really excited to read more like bouncing in my seat kind of excited

Nice

Constrictor Constrictor
1/23/16

I love it please update

Kat1st Kat1st
11/28/15

This is good as!

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11/26/15