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Crystalline Melodies I: Undying Strains - Comments, page 4
You need more than just 800+ views, sweetheart. This story needs it. It is wonderful.
*shares on Tumblr agressivly*
@NeverEndingTale
I am glad you enjoyed it! I am a ridiculously slow writer, but I'll update as soon as I possibly can.
A Quite appreciating writing and a fast-going storyline that made me want to read more. Excellence in your narrative parts of the story, especially when it comes to the character's feelings. I honestly would like to inform you that I only critique stories on this website only when I believe it's worthy to spare my free time on writing a single line. Your's has made me to make an edit for the first time. I'm pleased by the storyline and I hope that you will update this work of art soon.
~NeverEndingTale
A Quite appreciating writing and a fast-going storyline that made me want to read more. Excellence in your narrative parts of the story, especially when it comes to the character's feelings. I honestly would like to inform you that I only critique stories on this website only when I believe it's worthy to spare my free time on writing a single line. Your's has made me to make an edit for the first time. I'm pleased by the storyline and I hope that you will update this work of art soon.
~NeverEndingTale
Nice chapter!
12/28/14