Crystalline Melodies I: Undying Strains - Comments, page 6

@Grafon
*happy-speechless*

I have no idea how the family tree works out in this story. Frankly, I don't care. You are the only the second writer I have come across on this site whom I can say without a doubt is better than me. I'M A YOUNGER BROTHER. I don't say things like that. All narcissism aside, this story has depth like no other. I truly believe you have a command of tone and voice to top all others, especially with your narrative voice. The only suggestion I would make to you would be to break your chapters up into multiple parts. Your writing is too good to be skimmed over because your chapters are pushing the 3000-word mark. Besides, there are always multiple songs with the same vibe to pair with each chapter (which is an ingenious idea, by the way). Keep up the phenomenal work, I am intrigued in the least to see how this turns out.

@theteenagefandom
YA EVIL GIRL BECAUSE OF YOU WE'RE ALL DEAD ;)

*BLOWS UP UNIVERSE*
*snaps*
Deal with it.

@theteenagefandom
WELL TOO BAD I CLAPPED HARDER THAN YOU.

@Mori volo
*CLAPZ SO LOUD THAT THE UNIVERSE GOES DEAF* HAH!

I CLAPPED FIRST HAHAHAHA! *grins*
@MorningStar
@Mori volo

Thanks again, guys! Your comments really do encourage me to keep writing. Literally-not-figuratively. Seriously-not-kidding. =D

This is absolutely amazing! I really enjoy your work. It's clearly well-written and I am hooked just by the first chapter! Bravo!
*clapz harder then Echo and Morning Star*

@theteenagefandom
*clapz harder than Echo*

*clapz*

I love this! Keep writing! :D

Wow! Nice, nice job :D Keep on going! You're like, AWESOME!
-Echo

@TheSavingGrace
*is gonna cry* =')

Oh my gods...you are such an amazing writer! Do us all a favor and:

1. Don't give up on this masterpiece.

2. Don't let the haters get to you, because you're one the most talented writers on this website and beyond.

@RecklessDaring
Thank you so much! I am really glad you are enjoying it! I am in the process of writing it, but will post updates as I can. =)

This.
This is amazing.
You are an incredibly talented writer! PLEASE keep going and don't leave me hanging! :P