Writing Reviews and Rants - Comments, page 3

@iJay
MERRY CHRISTMAS EVE TO YOU TOO! :DDDDD
--Sincerely, Chinny. :DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

@Torissa Nikole
HA THAT'S GREAT
MERRY CHRISTMAS EVE <3

@iJay
I'm actually working on yours right now. :)

love:)

can you do my story just level 1 commentary please or to please , and you can completely go off and have fum and not give me the pretty package, levle 5 and up is fine with me.

@Constrictor
Sure! Just give me the information indicated in chapter 2 and I'll add it to the list. :)

Warfare please! I know it only has two chapters, but I need a critique to see how I can make it better.

Thank you as well!

:)

@Torissa Nikole
It's fine! I'll get that info to you soon.


PS: I'm alway busy.Litterally.

@Greek Freak
Hey, sorry it's taken so long. Been really busy. Also, before I can, I'll need the information indicated in Chapter 2. Thanks! =)

Hey! I just need a bit of general feedback (i.e. If you like it, if you think others will like it, etc.). The name of my story is Choices, it is action, adventure, and teen, it's rated PG-13, and is by me: Greek Freak
Thanks,
Greek Freak (-;

@MrJoker20
Thanks!
Oh, when I said "wasn't your first" I meant wasn't your first language...lol. I'm glad you liked it! And you don't have to worry about waiting to update on my account. I'll just wait until I've read The Son of Neptune before reading any more. Publish away!

Well, that was definitely something, I've received from You! :D Maybe I should consider asking for more harshness next time... who knows :)

I really appreciate everything You've said and the tips for future chapters - I'd really hate to update until You read "The Son of Neptune" so it won't spoil Your fun. (Reyna is my favorite female character from the entire series! :D)

Next thing - I think I didn't use the correct words - this story is not my first ever. This is the first one on this site. I actually got a few more stories in my "drawer" ready to be published.
Anyway, I'll release chapter 3 (or 4 if i rewrite the "prologue") today, in about an hour or so. The ending, and the next chapter, will give You an interesting reference to one of the books from the original Percy Jackson series.

I guess that's all for now - stay awesome! :D

Thank you! :)

@The Bright One
I am so very glad it did! I'm still trying to figure out what makes the best review and what just sounds weird/nitpicky, so I'm really glad I at least didn't mess this one up. Good luck! =)

Thank you so much for the review! We have holidays coming up in about 2 1/2 weeks so I'll go over the story then (dependent on work) and edit the bits that both you and myself are unhappy with.
Thank you so much! This has helped me more than I can express! :)

@RecklessDaring
It's fine. You already asked for one on that story, so you basically just gave me the info I needed to get started! LOL

@RecklessDaring
Thanks! I'll add in the new info and get on it as soon as I can.

I would very much like a review on my story A Very Cold Reunion, with a thoroughness of 4 and a harshness of 6, with a definite emphasis on character development, humor, and the way I portray the canon characters. I try to match the books as closely as I possibly can when it comes to writing style :P

@Torissa Nikole
:) thank you so much

@iJay
@Araneae Siqua
I'll add them to the list.