Writing Reviews and Rants - Comments

Can you please review my story "The Will of The Gods" with a depth of 3 and a harshness of 3? It is yet to be completed so please tack that into account. Thank you!

@Torissa Nikole
Please review my story "The Life of Kara Beckham" with a depth of 2 and harshness of 3. It is not finished yet so please excuse tat fact in your review.

@iJay
It really depends on how they present it. If it's anobviously intentional clone, then no, I don't approve of it. That's lazy. I say make your own character with as few outside influences as possible. If it turns out to be similar to something else, that's alright: there's no way you can create a 100% original character. You can always tweak it a bit later to make it different, and your writing style should be different enough that the characters aren't ridiculously comparable.
no I haven't read Fangirl.

wikipedia says it's true; some newspapers from 2012 back it up; nothing recent, but there's a link to her original name "snowqueens icedragon" and her fanfic. good enough for me. she got her twilight fan fiction published.
well, there's harry styles fan fiction that also got published. I kind of want to know how you feel about that. Isn't that kind of plagiarism? To just change the names but steal the characters? Have you ever read Fangirl? They talk about this sort of plagiarism a little bit.

@iJay
Yeah, I think I heard that somewhere. It's pretty dang pathetic.

on the note of fifty shades of gray, also take notice that it was actually TWILIGHT FANFICTION before she changed the names, SELF-PUBLISHED HER OWN FANFICTION, and sold it.

I will read up on this a little more to prove the accuracy of this and get back to y'all later

@Araneae Siqua
No problem! And if you want suggestions for reads, I could suggest some things. :)

Thanks for reviewing my story! I'll e sure to wait for more reviews(because I'm sadly out of stuff to read... -_-)

Thanks for reviewing my story! I'll e sure to wait for more reviews(because I'm sadly out of stuff to read... -_-)

Dear Fanfiction sounds pretty good. I think I'll read that.

@That_Dam_Persassy
Sure, I'll add it to the list. :)

Could you review my story " You Choose: Camp War?"

Hey! can you review my story "Eternal Warrior " and provide feed back If you like it, if you think others will like it, etc.How to improvise and where to.

@UltimateBookWorm
Sure! I'll add it to the list.

I totally agree, all I want is to find a damn good erotica story but on this site the only ones I found never get updated, I like the aftermath but it doens't call to me.
I hate porn ew.

Hi can you rant/review my book Dust and Gold please?

I agree entirely with your first rant. I have no problem with erotica when it's a part of the story, either. In fact, I've written some myself, for a non-fanfiction story. But things like Love Potion and Drew Tanaka...no. And the fact is, those stories aren't actually even enjoyable for people who prefer actual literature as opposed to porn. For example, Fifty Shades of Grey. It's a popular book...why? Because sex. However, ANYONE who's actually an avid reader or qualified literary critic HATES that book...and not because it's all about sex, but because the quality of the writing itself is AWFUL (and no, I haven't read the book, but I live on the Internet so I've run into a few things, namely this). But anyway, back to the point. Smut is actually BORING if you're exposed to a lot of it. You just grow desensitized because you've heard it all before. Yawn. But creative, and inspiring true-to-character romances (what theteenagefandom refers to as "coot"), are enough to make any fangirl jump up and down and flap their arms while shrieking gleefully. For example, Percabeth One shots by SweetSalt. THAT is the kind of thing that PJO fans really want. Not porn.
That is all.

Thanks.

@theteenagefandom
I won't. :)

@Torissa Nikole
Okay cool ;) I want to keep the one review you gave me me though so don't delete it.