Writing Reviews and Rants - Comments, page 2

@percabeth120
Sure! I'll add it to the list.

@theteenagefandom
Oh! Well, once you've got a few more chapters up or whatever, I can always do a re-review. But now, I've changed the rules a lot, so it may be different anyways.

Could you give my story a review too? The name is Stacey Pendragon -daughter of the sea

Darnit. I've changed a lot though, plus there's a new chapter.

@theteenagefandom
Ah, sorry. I'm going through and reposting everything so I can have the rules right next to each other in the beginning. That's just the old one...I hadn't finished, and I was gonna put the explanation of doing that when I had, but yeah... :/

Wait did you just re-review my story!!?? :D :D :D

Can you check my story eternal warrior.Its just new and a little different.I don't know where I am leading it.The first few chapters are little descriptive since I could not create anything like Archnae. Again I am still fighting with my story Destiny Child which I will take time to complete.The Lotus casino episode is really taking toll .

@Torissa Nikole
xD yeah but you're right.

@theteenagefandom
It's the smut. (S)he's appealing to the sex-obsessed public, and it's ridiculous. What really made me angry was when someone commented on there about the smut, there was this whole "fan uproar" and they were bullied incessantly over it. I'm like "you're the one reading the smut, you sick person." Again, sex can be a great plot device, but there IS NO PLOT FOR SEEKING HAPPINESS. UGH, everyone is so OOC because I can guarantee you they all wouldn't approach sex that way. They have higher standards/morals than that.
I started ranting again, didn't I? Whoops. (Not) sorry.

@Torissa Nikole

Resurrected is like the best fanfic out there...it deserves wayyyy more views than Seeking Happiness. Plus the author isn't really that stupendous of a writer either.

@MorningStar
:)

That rant was beautiful.

@theteenagefandom
Exactly.

@Filia Sapientia
Yes! And it's really sad how popular they get. They often surpass the actually decent writing. Like, how could Seeking Happiness have gotten past Half Blooded, Half Chosen, or Resurrected? HOW?! IT MAKES NO SENSE.

@Filia Sapientia
IKR

@Torissa Nikole
SEX has its place. Meaningless porn...not so much.

Oh thank goodness I'm glad I'm not the only one... I hate those kinds of "stories"
@Torissa Nikole
@theteenagefandom

@theteenagefandom
Well, I'm just glad I'm not alone in feeling that way. I'm literally just waiting for an onslaught of people ready to behead me over this...

You finally put my feelings into words with that chapter.

<3